ext_16847 ([identity profile] delphinapterus.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] gala_apples 2011-12-03 05:40 pm (UTC)

This is so good! I love the way that Jet is so forward and firm about love being the thing to sieze if Nic can have it. The way Grace comes up and it's so obvious that Jet start loves her so much but he's trying not to show just how much while also telling Nic that all the guys are part of her and are her family. The whole part about how Jet is with Nic because they need the networks and how a good or bad decision by one person has a ripple effect feels very natural and it makes so much sense.

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