ext_90342 ([identity profile] dr-jasley.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] gala_apples 2011-06-09 04:14 pm (UTC)

Part one comment...part two :)

ROGUE PART….ALREADY >.
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ROGUE PART….ALREADY >.<ing I mean it’s still your awesome writing but garrrgggg rogue’s mentality here is so ‘I’m better than you’ and I want to punch her and you know I never want to punch people. Brendon and Jubilee is shiny to think of. Also poor Brendon fidgeting and making the desks move away. Brendon waning Jubilee to shock him(why am I suddenly thinking about the taser thing :P) God Rogue is a bitch. And she just talked Brent into leaving>.<(I knew it was going to happen…but stillllll )

GERARD…..GERARD sooo AWESOME. Ooooooosss totally nifty the description of Frank reabsorbing himself. Just seriously the feel of this whole section ALL THE LOVE. A boy with a Mohawk thanking them. And of course not everyone was going to be ‘Happy’ : ( . U2 reference MCR will never be like that. God Gerard is just soooo earnest and true here. Rant about it Gee, seriously why should it even matter. (SO FAR GERARD’S PART IS MY FAVORITE jsyk)

JOHN YAY St. John part !!!! : ) . Awwww Brendon noticing that Ryan likes Spencer but Spencer being oblivious…..seriously Spence Wise Up. Why such a tool Bobby? Totally easy to like Rogue you don’t have to do anything cause touching her is a no no. Another mention of a Mohawk*so question…..is this a different Mohawk guy? :D* Why must the Bobby John love be sooooo Romeo and Juliet*whines* Stupid Rogue getting in the way. Ryan has a vest, this means no scarf*yes I went there *snerks** and of course sex anyways. *snickers*

AWWW Frank you missed out on being a baker*snaps fingers* drat. *Snickers* he’s done with Schrodinger also *highfives* nerdy reference for the win. Brain texting, I like that. And dude sometimes Frank not remembering which one of him is the copy or not. Shiny. And end of commentary for part one : )

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