LOL, I reread my comment and I was all CASE IN POINT. JFC. no for know. Really? REALLY? *failstamps self*

Cool, thanks. I don't know if you reread it, but I added about 500 words of descriptions, so it should be a lot clearer now.

Also, I think I thought of something that could work for Brendon during the punishment arc? I logged on for a few minutes but you weren't there (obviously you're at work) so I'll try again in a few hours.